I found a precious stone
And left it in the room alone,
When sun rays struck it...
It called me and asked me to sit.
I started crying at the site,
Cause I couldn't say what was right?
He cried as loud as he could...
But I could do nothing,
So I stood...
I stood and then fell down
I was cold enough to drown..
He told me something,
And that took me to heaven.
I asked God, why
Why was the stone glad...
As he had no lad ?
Then God told me,
He has a friend that he can see...
As he pointed towards me,
And then I could see..
Man is nature's best friend...
And only he can stop it from shrinking...
Waking up from his Illusion...
Towards a new beginning!
Finally you posted it here after aeons !!
ReplyDeleteI really liked this one...though pic courtesy goes to me :P
Loved it...
Take Care.
Thanks appi :)
Deleteso happy to see u back in action....lovely poem...the feel u created wid this one is just too...hmm well out of words..:P...loved it..n waitin 4 more...dont vanish this time plz...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot di.. and sorry di seems like I had vanished again, but this time I'll update hopefully :)
DeleteThat was a beautiful piece ! I loved the simplicity in which you have portrayed the beauty of nature ! Wonderful ! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You so much. :)
Deletehey! nice poem...nice depiction of the human nature bond...good work...wud lyk 2 read more of it..
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Thanks a lot di..glad you liked it :)
DeleteWow..it started so beautifully and the end left me thinking..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful use of personification..
Thanks for chiming in my blog :) ..
Thanks Alcina.
DeleteAnd welcome to my blog :)
Excellent rhyming...and beautiful poem..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
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